How I Write by Janet Evanovich

Author:Janet Evanovich
Language: eng
Format: epub
ISBN: 9781429916011
Publisher: St. Martin's Press

EXAMPLE 3

“Not only is this going to be an easy catch,” Lula said, parking at the food court entrance, “but we can get pizza and go shopping.”

A half hour later, we were full of pizza and had taken a couple new perfumes out for a test drive. We’d moseyed down the mall and were standing in front of Pickle’s shoe store, scoping out the employees. I had a photo of Pickle that had come with his bond agreement.

“That’s him,” Lula said, looking into the store. “That’s him on his knees, trying to sell that dumb woman those ugly-ass shoes.”

—Twelve Sharp

This is the obvious transition of simply describing time passing and movement through space. They arrive at the mall. They need to get to a shoe store. We see what they do en route.

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