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Drafting Contracts: How and Why Lawyers Do What They Do, Second Edition by Stark Tina L

Drafting Contracts: How and Why Lawyers Do What They Do, Second Edition by Stark Tina L

Author:Stark, Tina L. [Stark, Tina L.]
Language: eng
Format: epub
Publisher: Aspen Publishers
Published: 2013-11-26T00:00:00+00:00


Wrong

Without limiting the generality thereof…

Correct

Without limiting the generality of the preceding sentence …6

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Said and such are pointing words. They refer to something previously stated. Replace them with the, a, that, or those.

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Wrong

Bonus. With respect to each year of the Term, the Company shall pay the Executive a bonus equal to 10% of [such] [said] year’s Net Profits, except that the Company is not obligated to pay [such] [said] bonus with respect to any year of the Term in which Net Profits are less than $1 million.

Correct

Bonus. With respect to each year of the Term, the Company shall pay the Executive a bonus equal to 10% of that year’s Net Profits, except that the Company is not obligated to pay the bonus with respect to any year of the Term in which Net Profits are less than $1 million.



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