100 Successful College Application Essays by The Harvard Independent

Author:The Harvard Independent [Independent, The Harvard]
Language: eng
Format: epub
Tags: Itzy, Kickass.to
ISBN: 9781101614235
Amazon: B00C5WZ1QE
Publisher: Penguin USA
Published: 2013-07-02T04:00:00+00:00

COMMENT:

Jordana has a cute idea and therein is its limitation. Certainly it shows initiative and a coherent style to present her deviant goldfish is such glowing terms. Alas, it also reflects the slick condensation of advertising, replete with audiovisual aids. Is the fish breathing a little too heavily perhaps? (SAB)

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I like this. It is simply written but makes a powerful statement for independence that most students (and adults) can relate to. Using the Goldfish heading catches the reader’s attention. (BPS)

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